When I wrote my thesis, my thought process consisted of a straight to the point generalization, that included my metaphor, and who the metaphor was going to be based on. Originally, my thesis was going to be based upon 3 different topics however, …show more content…
However, my father and my close peers were able to assist me in my process of writing my final draft and with their corrections, I was able to implement them into my paper which served as a massive aid when writing this analysis. When my peers and my father were helping me in my analysis, they noticed that throughout my rough draft, I was using too many words, I wasn’t exploring much bigger vocabulary, and my sentence structure and complex sentences needed more work and when I was looking over the essay, I could immediately see what they were talking about.
So, I started to work on exactly what they said. And soon enough, I was done with my analysis because, I had already done my thesis, my ideas were all laid out and put together perfectly, and it had all made sense in the end. Some ideas however, I couldn't implement into my essay because, most of time, it would of metaphorically unscrewed some of the bolts that kept my essay together. Overall, I believed it did help and I can’t thank them enough for their