Background information on my topic was non-existent, and I was despicably vague. At the time of my first essay, I had no prior knowledge that in order to have an effective introduction; background information was needed about my subject. What did refutation of a common belief even mean? My wrongdoings were indescribable and utterly embarrassing; on the contrary, my improvement was indescribable and utterly intoxicating. I have corrected my mistakes in my introduction drastically since my first essay. I am now able to describe my subject precisely and give underlying details about my topic. I have now started to use vigorous verbs. (“Writing the Paragraphs in the First Draft”). My style of writing has changed entirely and I have gained confidence and pride in my work. In the beginning, I did not consider myself a strong writer; however, I now believe that I am on my way to achieving …show more content…
I contained some of the topics necessary for having an effective introduction. I used parallel structure while keeping it coherent and unified. The introduction stayed consistently smooth flowing, and the essay’s introduction also remained logical. I stated all my points accordingly and emphatically. I was writing a work of art that touched me deep, and I was very proud of my work in my narrative essay’s introduction. My organization was solid and profound. I honestly believe that my introduction in my narrative essay was my best piece of art, and in the beginning of this class, I would not have been able to write that solid. In my narrative essay, I did not do anything for an ineffective introduction. I was able to overcome the obstacles of writing introductions, and be able to handle the pressure of introductions. My narrative essay was my confidence booster, and the introduction in my narrative essay took my beyond my past