Adding more personal experiences to my writing will provide engagement to the reader, thus allowing a more significant connection. Personality sets one writing apart from the next. A lack of relating leaves an undesired void within the content. Personal experiences …show more content…
Paragraph Unity is required to keep thoughts from becoming scrambled. Sometimes my focus goes towards the required length, consequently making the unification an improbability. In future papers I will pay attention to keeping thoughts and ideas together. It is important to not come off as being scatter brained when writing.
Similarly, the proper use of commas separates multiple ideas from one another when necessary, also it prevents run-on sentences. Subjects can take on a whole new meaning. Also, comma splices separate content that should be linked together. A comma before quotation marks establishes a boundary from the writer’s idea’s to whomever is being quoted. Commas can enable the reader to interpret the writing in different ways. These are all areas that I can improve upon within my writing.
On the other hand, after all the necessary adjustments that have been mentioned, there are some improvements within my writing. My creative thought flow has improved, thus allowing me to think outside of the norm pertaining to writing. Furthermore, this thought flow helps to overcome the mind blocks that are bound to happen when composing a paper. Even though my spelling was never bad; it has improved due to doing papers with spell checker, and seeing where my mistakes are being made. My proper usage of MLA format has been one of my strong points since starting this