Wedding is usually a long awaited event and people make a big fuss over it. (“breed” means reproduce, so it does not suit.)
2. Moreover the groom and the bride are nervous about how the ceremony will be held because everybody prepares for this special day for a long time and spends a lot of effort and time on it.
In addition the groom and the bride are nervous about how the ceremony will be held because everybody prepares for this special day for a long time and spends a lot of effort and time on it. (“Moreover” is a conjunctive adverb which can not stand in the beginning of the sentence in academic writing.)
3. It is common knowledge that wedding dress is the …show more content…
(Such phrase is more suitable.)
5. So girls are very responsible to the choice of their finery, they try to find something amazing and specific, as the wedding happens only ones.
So girls are very responsible for the choice of their finery, they try to find something amazing and specific, as the wedding happens only ones. (“Responsible” is an adjective which requires “for” after itself.)
6. By the way, ladies have better know some superstitions according their main detail not to spoil all their diligences and to avoid bad future for your couple.
By the way, ladies better know some superstitions according their main detail not to spoil all their diligences and to avoid bad future for your couple. (The right usage of this phrase does not require the verb “to have”.)
7. As well, it is also a bad sign to have a skirt and a corset instead of the whole dress because it means that you will live separately with your sweetheart.
As well, it is also bad sign to have a skirt and a corset instead of whole dress because it means that you will live separately from your sweetheart. (An adjective “separately” goes with the preposition …show more content…
(In the previous sentence was information about necessity of saving the dress after wedding but not about the dress itself.)
9. Secondly, it is useful to outline info about some things that act like connectors for honeymooners.
Secondly, it is useful to outline information about some things that act like connectors for honeymooners. (It is an inappropriate word for academic writing.)
10. Somebody tie two bottles of champagne with a ribbon and keep them at home. Somebody ties two bottles of champagne with a ribbon and keep them at home. (“Somebody” is singular, so it requires the verb to have -es ending.)
11. Before the marriage the groom and the bride need to look in one mirror.
Before arriving to the registry office the groom and the bride need to look in one mirror. (Provided case is not very clear for understanding.)
12. Just married couple during the celebration should sit on the fur coat not to feel a shortage of money and be independent in finances.
Just married couple during the celebration should sit on a fur coat not to feel a shortage of money and be independent in finances. (“Fur coat” is not specific