Both grew up in a predominately white area in which there were only a handful of kids like them. In September of 1996 Ms. Desmond-Harris had been informed of Tupac’s death and was then faced with the reality of coming to terms of who she was. In the aftermath of his death she …show more content…
We were able to get a slight understand of someone who is mixed race and what the struggle of what they go through on a day to day basis. For those that are a fan on Tupac, like myself, it took us back to that very day of the incident which drew us into the story. Punctuation was clear and precise and was also used when needed. I was not able to find any spelling errors in misuse of words which I gave a thumbs up for because it was good writing in that sense. In regards to if the article was effective or ineffective I feel it leans more being effective because it causes the reader to think. Although the story flip flops you are still able to gasp the principle of what the writer is trying to get across to the