College Admissions Essay: The Possibility Of My Life

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It all began one fateful night with a dresser, a television and a courageous toddler with more than enough willpower to get himself in some trouble. I was four years old and fixed on getting what I wanted on my own time, despite the risks. Although I can't remember the accident or anything that occurred prior to it, I will never be able to void the experiences I had afterwards. Luckily, I no longer have to challenge the idea that I would never have the mental capacity of a person my age. I've surpassed the expectations of all of the doctors and specialists that were confident of the presence of a permanent mental disability within me. My determination to challenge my potential and reach further than the limits that were set for me prompted …show more content…
My older brother and sister settled onto their beds and I began to have a tantrum about turning on the television. My older brother was searching for the remote under surrounding his bed and took longer than I would tolerate. As my older sister joined in searching for the remote, I took matters into my own hands and began to climb onto the four foot tall dresser where the television was nestled above. Just as I was using the knobs on the second drawer to get higher, my siblings took notice and began to cry out for me to come down. As I grabbed onto the third drawer, the large tv came crashing down onto my head as I was planted on the carpet in a pool of blood. My nose was leaking as I laid unconscious. In the week following, I was in the hospital being treated by specialists that all deemed that my injuries would result in a mental retardation.
My mother did not accept my diagnosis as my destiny. She instilled strong determination within me to never succumb to what others deem to be my potential. After I left the hospital following all of the treatment, I didn’t feel the same. I even experienced seizures from time to time. But I wasn’t going to let that stop me. I didn’t plan on giving up then, and more importantly, I wanted to prove those specialists

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