After evaluating my essay, I do not feel that I had used good sentence variety, for on the third page of my argument, I counted my sentence types and I found that I used simple sentence about 70% of the time. On the other hand, I gained new skills on how to improve my writing through my errors. By making mistakes, I was able to learn about quotations namely, when to incorporate them and when to leave them out. I also learned how to structure an essay as well and where to put transition sentences. I will learn from my mistakes and better my learning through trial and
After evaluating my essay, I do not feel that I had used good sentence variety, for on the third page of my argument, I counted my sentence types and I found that I used simple sentence about 70% of the time. On the other hand, I gained new skills on how to improve my writing through my errors. By making mistakes, I was able to learn about quotations namely, when to incorporate them and when to leave them out. I also learned how to structure an essay as well and where to put transition sentences. I will learn from my mistakes and better my learning through trial and