In Revisions Strategies Of student Writers and Experienced adult Writing by Nancy Sommers I read about how the current writing model has directed attention away from revision. Sommer discusses various models for how to revise papers throughout the chapter. She argues that “when movement fails to take into account in its linear structure-”first..then..finally”-is the recursive shaping of thought language; what it fails is account of revision” (writing about writing). Sommer says the models are successful because they are linear. Overall, Sommers ideas were successful because she was clear and provided examples.
How Revising is an Issue
Sommers is discussing the issue about revising because she thinks that people view that