When I unsealed the envelope, I was nervous to read it. I finally opened the letter and it said I did not receive the scholarship. My head started pounding with many questions. Not knowing what to do, I talked to my counselor to see why I did not get it. I was told that I missed the whole concept of the prompt, because I thought a little too much. Wanting the essay to be the best, I added things to it to make it sound professional and college-like. I remember going into detail about myself, accomplishments, goals, and a little detail of the extracurricular activities I attended. But, at the same time, I still focused on what the scholarship prompt was
When I unsealed the envelope, I was nervous to read it. I finally opened the letter and it said I did not receive the scholarship. My head started pounding with many questions. Not knowing what to do, I talked to my counselor to see why I did not get it. I was told that I missed the whole concept of the prompt, because I thought a little too much. Wanting the essay to be the best, I added things to it to make it sound professional and college-like. I remember going into detail about myself, accomplishments, goals, and a little detail of the extracurricular activities I attended. But, at the same time, I still focused on what the scholarship prompt was