My Essay: My Writing As A Writer

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The introduction is very good and it does give you an idea of what the paper is about. The writer mentions his main points through the paper and it engages the reader to the paper.

The content is very good and the topic sentences develop each paragraph towards the content of the writers ideas. It just needs a litlle more organization for some of the concepts he is expressing

The writer did an excellent job with his conclusion. It is very strong and it has a satisfying ending. I think it is my favorite part of the essay because he was focusing on what he wanted to say and its not

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