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It was the summertime when i was about 12 and me and my friends from the neighborhood went riding our bikes. we were looking for something to do in the blazing hot outdoors.It was me my friend Felipe, Ben and his two older brothers. Felipe and I have been friends for a while and he’s smart and liked to play army games. And I met Ben when i moved in the neighborhood and along with his brothers were cool but I got weird vibes from them and so will this other thing that i will soon experience.
We all rode around the block when we got an idea to race. It was my friend Felipe's idea to do he was always like “Let’s race on our bikes and winner gets a KING SIZE CANDY BAR!!”. Once I heard candy bar I couldn’t help myself but to join and try to win, it was crazy we gathered every kid in our neighborhood that had a bike for the race. When we got all the kids we could get the race sounded even better than before because everybody had a chance to win and made it more intense We got all the kids lined up and the race was about to start.
As the race was about to start my heartbeat started to pick up and I got a bit of fear in my belly. When I looked over I saw all my friends
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And everything was blurry and really loud I could hear anything I could like hear a penny drop from a mile away it was so loud. But when I made my way up stairs I got a killer headache and my stomach made me feel like I was dying it was hurting so bad I wanted to cry. Then out of nowhere I got the feeling of throwing up I felt the vomit starting to rise up in my belly so I covered my mouth and bolted for the bathroom and threw up everywhere that's when my mom and dad decided made the decision to take me to the hospital. I mean they wanted to make sure that I was alright and didn't have a concussion so they started to ask me questions like when is my birthday and what’s my name type of

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