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2012 July 4th my sister was having trouble with her boy friend and he wanted to see his girls my nieces they weren't supposed to meat but they did anyway so my sister got out of the car and left the kids in there so they could talk they weren't tall enough to see out the window he had one of the kids blanket behind his back and rolled up was a knife my sister got st-abed four times Jaslene and Naya could only hear Emily screaming and he ran off to the river there were two college girls at the gas station and a firefighter they all ran over to help and applied pressure one one of the college girls was terrified of blood so she drove the kids away to a more safe enviorment it took almost an hour for the ambulance to get there then my sister was flown to haver view and was there for about 3 months and then she was able to come back and me and my broth took care of her and her dauters but now she's perfectly heathy and back with her