The Lost One Analysis

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The Lost Ones

1984 There is a young woman that goes by the name of Rosa, age 28. She’s living with her 30 year old husband, Mark, and her five year old son, Jason. One day the Davis family went to an abandon creek to have a picnic. As they walked down the stream water on a cold day in 1978 there were bubbles coming out of the water. “Mommy,” Jason said, “why is there a lady sleeping in the water?” At that moment they started to run. Jason dropped his favorite blanket in the water. “No!” Jason screamed emotionally. “My blanket!” As he ran down into the water and grabbed his blanket, he saw a glowing rock. As he grabbed it, the lady he saw sleeping in the water came racing
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“Where are you?” “Jason, listen to me run up the tree before she comes,” Mark says in a rush. “But why da-” “Just do it now!” Mark screams in a rush as he runs to that lady. As Jason began to run, the lady came and grabbed him. She raced down into the water and drowned him alive. Afterwards she tied up the rest of the family and had Mark watch the lady drown Rosa. One by one they all died. “This is Jenny Capital is coming to you from this spot where the Davis family got murdered. Reports say that father Mark Davis, killed his son, Jason Davis and made his wife, Rosa Davis, watch her son get killed. After he killed Rosa, he committed suicide by drowning himself in the lake. We will go deeper into the story tonight at 6pm this Jenny Capital signing out have a wonderful night.” Angelique Munoz, Rosa’s mother. Watched this on the news and just cried.
“Why! Why! Why my daughter!” She screams and cried. She runs to her room and cries on her husband, Jose Munoz. “What! What’s wrong?” Jose says curiously. “Why are you crying?” “She’s dead,” Angelique mumbles “She got killed,” “Who are you talking about? Don’t be
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Who killed her?” Jose screams angrily.
“I don’t know.”
“Let’s go get a sweater on and get in the car, we are going there now!” They get into the car and start to drive to the place she died. They told her to go home, they can’t do anything about it. 2016

As the warm, August day came up, a new school opened, AE Middle school. There were a group of friends, they called themselves, “The lost ones.” In the group is was Junior, Michael, Jessica, and Yessi. The first day of school everyone went to Jessica’s house to get ready. In every group there are the smart ones and the curious ones, well in this group Junior was the curious one and Jessica was one of the smart ones. As they talked about how they imagined the new school to be, Jessica did research on that spot. Jessica grabbed her computer and started to lookup the location. “Guys check this out, It’s something weird,” Jessica said in confusion. “What is it?” Yessi said “It says here that in 1984 a family was murdered or made a suicide attempt in a canal that the school built over.” “What the brownies!” Junior said trying to keep himself from cursing. “Well who died?” Michael said. “How old was everyone?” Junior

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