In my Argumentative Essay, A before quote: “Concussions are extremely common now a days and need to be examined properly”. Then my end quote, “Concussions are a very serious issue and the children now a days need to know certain fundamentals on what to do if they have a concussion”. My process in choosing this topic was to let the reader understand about my research question, which had to deal with concussions. My ideas and attitudes about …show more content…
After quote, “I am thankful that this event happened and I am so glad it became a reality”. My process in choosing this topic had to deal with me transferring schools during my junior year of high school. My ideas and attitudes about the subject changed after each draft. I added more details and expanded my writing. The readers were likely most confused about my description of California and the way I formatted it into the opening paragraph. I made my ideas clear for the reader and expanded my analyze. My most significant change in writing this essay was the analyze portion. I needed to include more detail in that. This essay taught me how to include myself in my own writing. It was a neat experience. It taught me how to have creativity about myself. I am most proud of my thinking skills when declaring a