Horowitz introduction is written as follows; “McDermott tosses me the keys to his pickup, and I hoist his chrome walker into the truck's bed.” (Horwitz) The way she chose to start out the article grabs you and pulls you along for the story. She uses vague and modest words to describe the brief but informative event that just took place; Bruce gets into the car. This scene is illustrated with important word choice. The word ‘chrome’ automatically pulls the reader to that part of the sentence, drawing attention to the fact that Bruce has a walker. Instead of just saying she hoisted his walker into the truck she writes” I hoist his chrome walker into the truck’s bed.” (Horowitz) This simple addition of the word chrome draws notice to the fact that he has a disability, which we ultimately learn is from the use of the pesticides. Since this is just the beginning of the article we do not know this yet so we are left wondering why he has this chrome walker. Intriguing word choice like this appeals to the reader and helps create a solid first
Horowitz introduction is written as follows; “McDermott tosses me the keys to his pickup, and I hoist his chrome walker into the truck's bed.” (Horwitz) The way she chose to start out the article grabs you and pulls you along for the story. She uses vague and modest words to describe the brief but informative event that just took place; Bruce gets into the car. This scene is illustrated with important word choice. The word ‘chrome’ automatically pulls the reader to that part of the sentence, drawing attention to the fact that Bruce has a walker. Instead of just saying she hoisted his walker into the truck she writes” I hoist his chrome walker into the truck’s bed.” (Horowitz) This simple addition of the word chrome draws notice to the fact that he has a disability, which we ultimately learn is from the use of the pesticides. Since this is just the beginning of the article we do not know this yet so we are left wondering why he has this chrome walker. Intriguing word choice like this appeals to the reader and helps create a solid first