This has been the most crucial aspect of my writing in English 101 because I struggled with writing generalized sentences that needed valid information. I did not realize exactly what I was doing until my instructor made a comment on my Process Analysis paper that stated, “How do you know this? Distracted drivers act as if they…” For the first time I began to understand the difference between a vague sentence and a supported sentence, which influenced my writing to be more detailed than before English 101. I enjoyed writing the Process Analysis paper the most because it was a creative essay and it was my first experience with writing antitheses. I realized that it is crucial to provide supporting information in my writing so that my essays are credible instead of opinionated. By providing supporting evidence to sentences my writing no longer contained awkward bits of information, but rather straightforward and comprehensive
This has been the most crucial aspect of my writing in English 101 because I struggled with writing generalized sentences that needed valid information. I did not realize exactly what I was doing until my instructor made a comment on my Process Analysis paper that stated, “How do you know this? Distracted drivers act as if they…” For the first time I began to understand the difference between a vague sentence and a supported sentence, which influenced my writing to be more detailed than before English 101. I enjoyed writing the Process Analysis paper the most because it was a creative essay and it was my first experience with writing antitheses. I realized that it is crucial to provide supporting information in my writing so that my essays are credible instead of opinionated. By providing supporting evidence to sentences my writing no longer contained awkward bits of information, but rather straightforward and comprehensive