The thesis statement is the crux of the essay and informs the audience about the essay. The thesis statement for different types of essays is written in different sentence structure. In the argumentative essay, the thesis statement highlights the argument, while, in the informative essay, it announces the information about the subject. Through the lectures and helping materials, and also the templates, I learned to make the thesis statement. It is also the most time-taking part of the essay writing as most of the essay depends on this part. In my object analysis essay, I revised the thesis statement in my initial draft of the following statement, “I must say that Arabic-English Dictionary is the most helpful tool I ever get to survive in the culture of the USA and also to understand the most common terms being used by the people of the country.” It has significantly improved from my first draft because this thesis statement successfully communicates the effectiveness of the Arabic-English dictionary to …show more content…
The revising and proofreading are the techniques that I learned in Composition 111 essay that can significantly enhance the quality of a piece of writing. I acquired that once the draft is finished, one should proofread to point out any errors and revise it to ensure that each part is coherent and has a meaningful place in an essay. In revising the draft, I learned to correct the grammatical errors that remained unnoticed in the drafting stage of an essay. Also, I read and comprehended each paragraph of the drafts and reflected on how to improve its overall relevance and conciseness. The quality of the draft significantly improved from the first draft to the revised drafts and also enhances the readability of the