The majority of this essay was mainly to inform us about the theses produtcs so i would call thsi essay and argukent essay. To kae this more of a argemuten i would tell kiara vemture that she nned no implemted the other side beauces this essay was way to heavy one the cons side. Laslty i feel like the first part of her indrtocustuion about the miranda cosgroe and the grapfruit oil was ingtruing but it was ineffective becayse i soon forogt ablout it and kinda didnt do anything to help the essay.
The essay “Your Toxic Beauty Regime” was an informal and fact driven essay that i would recommed for other to read. It opened my eyes to read the indregigredint of not only beauty produvts but anything else i buy that im going to put in my body. As a society we need to be awre of our health and to protct ourselves beacuase the companies only care about theri bussiness and competion wuth othe brands. So if we can do that we can signfically decrse the risks that these products have that can harm