Creative Writing: Dumby's Murder

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Bob was at the pub talking about Dumby’s death to his mates. The pub was an old basement underneath a half demolished hotel. Bob was explaining how with Dumby’s death, Blacky was becoming a normal person again. One of Bob’s pub mates went up to the bar to grab a set of rounds for them all. He brings the drinks back to give to the group. Bob heads up to the bar. “Come on mate hold off for a bit you going to pass out if you have any more,” One of his mates called out. Of course Bob doesn’t listen and has the group’s rounds instead of sharing. Bob is nearly falling over his own feet he was that drunk. His mates sit him down at the table.

Fred walks into the pub dragging his feet along the ground, then ordering a drink in a quiet voice. “Hey Bob, Leave the drink you’re drunk enough. Keep telling us about the dickhead of a kid,” His mate called out across the pub.
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“Man was the shit head of a kid such a shit player, dropping all the piss easy passes, my sons would have smash that kid to the ground, he would have gone running home crying for his mummy,” Bob sad. Fed starts to feel offended by Bob’s convocation and steps in to defend Dumby Red’s dignity. Fred jumps up and turns around and confronts Bob who just had 15 rounds with his friends. “Dumby is not an idiot or a fucktard, Dumby was a great footy player and he help Blacky’s become a good player too. Maybe if you were at the game final you would know!” Fred shouted straight into Bob’s ugly Face. “Who the hell are you, to shout at me like that, you are bloody niggar,” Bob

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